The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
two maps illustrate the way to get to a city hospital of two different years(2007 and 2010)
according to both maps the main feature which is city hospital surrounded by is Ring Road. in these two maps there have been two features that still remained. this two features are city hospital and staff car park. apart from these two features there are some features that shows on 2010 map but haven't shown on 2007 map. the additional features are two arround-turn on the hospital Rd. which can lead to the bus station.
overall there are two major features that never change on both 2007 and 2010 map.these features are city hospital and staff car park. however there are some additional features that appear on the map of 2010 ut not on 2007. these features are public car park bus station and two arround-turns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67832167832 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37276344318 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496503496503 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5403603382 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.625 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377820760455 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201539066255 0.103423049105 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829577219041 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289449242923 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523105765927 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.92 8.06136585366 73% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 40.7170731707 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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