The two maps given below show access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps given provide information on access to city hospital by road between year 2007 and year 2010. Overall, the city hospital now have well planned lay out for both its staffs and public to park their cars and two roundabout leading to the bus stop unlike before.
In the year 2007,the hospital road was separated by six bus stop in total. The first three to the western axis and the second one to the towards the eastern part. There is also a car park facility for both the city hospital staffs and the public coming to the hospital.
City hospital in the year 2010, now have well structured and more facilities. The road leading to the hospital now have two major roundabout,one pointing to the South West while the other one is facing the South and the two leads to the big spacious bus stop which is separated by the hospital road. The public car park is at the extreme northern part of the city hospital.
By comparison, the hospital in 2010 have different car parks for its staffs and public, more so a separate place is gi for bus stop. However, the city hospital still maintained its locations for the ring road, the hospital and the road leading to the city for both years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'stop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'stops'.
Suggestion: stops
... hospital road was separated by six bus stop in total. The first three to the wester...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
...e hospital now have two major roundabout,one pointing to the South West while the ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50925925926 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2790571535 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467592592593 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0781543544 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284233561779 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129991812797 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103439295636 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199789114918 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857600168838 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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