The two maps compare the modification of a coastal area after its development for tourism purpose.
Overall, the island witnessed a noticeable change on the entire of the area. While the number of trees still remained, there were more accommodations for tourists as well as other tourism facilities.
In the center of the island, tourism infrastructure was absolutely constructed. The reception was established for welcome tourists and connected with other regions by the main road for bicycle. A restaurant was erected behind the reception for catering services. There are two bungalows which were linked together by footpath.
Along the fringe of the island, some facilities such as swimming and boats were built, whereas a pier was also constructed to serve cruises or water sport activities.
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- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 125.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.456 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96406207762 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3938169255 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194667050754 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722783084738 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433264375302 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112064692156 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287075429511 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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