the two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of turkey in 2000 and 2016.
the two pie charts illustrate how different industry sectors contributed to the economy of turkey percentage wise in the years 2000 and 2016.
Overall at the beginning of the period construction contributed the least to the economy of turkey, while agriculture was the most significant economic sector. in comparison, at the end of the period, health care and education became the largest economic segment and the lowest contribution was made by finance, business, and other services.
construction sector accounted for 3% of Turkey's economy in 2000 and experienced a more than threefold increase to one-tenth in 2016. Economic income from trade, utilities and transportation was 14% in 2000 and had a slight growth of 2% in 2016.at the beginning of the period, manufacturing and finance, business and other services made up 8% and 5% of turkeys economy respectively, and these figures rose to 12% and 8% in 2016.
agriculture, which comprised almost a quarter of Turkey's economy in 2000, fell to 14% in 2016.in 2010 economy outputs from government and leisure and hospitality sectors were at 12% and 17%, respectively, and both decreased by 3% after 16-year period .in contrast, contribution from health care and education sector remained constant in both years at 17%.
- Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any 56
- the two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of turkey in 2000 and 2016. 73
- the graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012. 61
- The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27450980392 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0167098393 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0310789067 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.333333333 112.824112599 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359904954716 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21370823441 0.103423049105 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174688771821 0.0843802449381 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269956381389 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185661050678 0.0819641961636 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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