Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Things like books, flight tickets, home needs, are mostly buying in E-shopping and it is becoming more popular. In my opinion, the advantages are more than disadvantages.
Firstly, the advantage of online buying is saving money. When we buy the thing online it will cost low compared to when buying in the stores.
Secondly, we can save time by purchasing online. Nowadays, time management will play a crucial role in humans life. So buying the items in the stores will take more time compared to purchasing in online.
Finally, there is a number of items in the online. Where we can choose the required model we want but in stores, we have to choose the products within the limited number of models and sometimes there will be no availability of products at festival seasons. For instance, if we buy the things in an online site like amazon there we can opt the model whatever we required but where in stores we should have to choose the product within the limited models.
One disadvantage of online shopping is the quality of the product. When we buy the product from online we cannot check the quality. For example, when we buy the rice bag from online we cannot check the quality of the rice but when we buy the same item in the store we can check it's quality.
Another disadvantage of purchasing the thing on the internet is a warranty issue. When we buy the item in online some products will not have the warranty on the purchased item. For instance, when I buy the headphones from online and after one week it is stopped working and there is no warranty issue on the headphones but when you buy at stores we can get a warranty on the product.
In conclusion, buying the products online can save time and money but it cannot assure the quality and warranty of the product.
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- Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61875 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44782269323 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403125 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5964673731 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116120253463 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605182062827 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618346061299 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848665869642 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808843901337 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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