Water usage in different purpose in different areas.

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Water usage in different purpose in different areas.

The provided pie charts present information about the proportion of water utilised for different objectives in six different areas of the world, namely North America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia.

According to the charts, most of the world, except North America and Europe, use water mainly in agriculture, while others utilise water for industrial production.

In the case of North America, almost half of the water expenditure is for industrial uses, with 39 percent dedicated for agricultural use and the remaining 13 percent is used for domestic purposes. South America, however, spends just under 3 quarters of the water in agriculture sector and the remaining 29% is divided between domestic and industrial use by 19% and 10% respectively. The most industrialized are among them is Europe with 53 percent of the water allocated for industrial uses and 32% for agricultural uses.

The remaining 3 areas of the world which are Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia share similar statistics with more than four fifths of the water used in agriculture. South East Asia stands out from the other 2 in terms of its water usage in industry, 12%, whereas Africa and Central Asia spends 7% and 5% respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17326732673 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77860399001 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.8472886871 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 149.285714286 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148492136649 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755464820536 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567672830737 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103266787626 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06023238383 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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