you recently attended a meeting at a hotel. when you returned home you found out you left some papers at the hotel.write the letter to the manager of the hotel.in your letter mentionwhere you think you left the paperswhy they were importanttell the manage

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you recently attended a meeting at a hotel. when you returned home you found out you left some papers at the hotel.
write the letter to the manager of the hotel.in your letter mention
where you think you left the papers
why they were important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

My Name is Naga, I am writing this letter regarding the essential papers those I left at your hotel during my last stay which was a week ago.

I checked-in to your hotel on the 22nd of February and checked-out on 6th March, that is around a fortnight stay for my business trip. I was in Room 424, it is on the 4th floor and extreme end. As per my knowledge, I think I left those documents either on the table which is in the hall or drawer which is in the bedroom.

The documents are confidential and these are related to the innovative project and those contain critical designs and structures. Moreover, that is my 30 days effort and much needed, otherwise, I could lose my job and I can not live without the job.

I would be grateful if you could please check and send the documents to my mailing address if you found them? you could call me on my mobile when needed.

Your's faithfully,
Naga

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, my Name is Naga, I am writing this lette...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a week' or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: a week; weeks
...our hotel during my last stay which was a weeks ago. I checked-in to your hotel on...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...o my mailing address if you found them? you could call me on my mobile when needed....
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45294117647 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41695997106 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0998414194 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194302507782 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706618032052 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790549242039 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114606966041 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902632874284 0.0580467560999 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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