You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Myself Naga and working for Oracle IDC as tech lead. Yesterday while discussing with my colleagues, I came to know that your team is organizing a seminar event soon in San Fransisco, United States of America.
Let allude briefly on what I need, I am looking for more information on the event, such as details about the program, is it tech event or General event? what are the dates and timings; will you provide accommodation, if yes, where you will be offering it and how much cost for the entire event(estimated).
Mostly I will be attending the seminar if it is tech event; it would be useful for my carrier growth; and also will present a workshop if I get a chance. I have good exposure to ML(Machine Learning) and would be interested in demonstrating automation strategies using ML and AI(Artifical Intelligence).
I would be grateful if you could provide these details and confirm whether I can involve in the seminar as a speaker.
Your's Faithfully,
Nag
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, Myself Naga and working for Oracle IDC a...
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...ram, is it tech event or General event? what are the dates and timings; will you pro...
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...emonstrating automation strategies using ML and AIArtifical Intelligence. I...
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...an involve in the seminar as a speaker. Yours Faithfully, Nag
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...r as a speaker. Yours Faithfully, Nag
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, if, look, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91715976331 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92457379684 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2588043921 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182698954075 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713235931384 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448953902357 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112750994682 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313365139998 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.