You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause?
What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Water singnificantly became one of the most global issue with no solutions upfornt. Part of the world right now have to deal with no fresh water for years to years.
First of all, the reason that leads to this problem was over-population. Some country have given birth to many which lead to their purpose to expand the lives and lands. Because of that, the nature was being destroy on taken in order to serve the purpose of human living. For example in New Deli, India, their population were explore which split the city into 2 parts. One side is where rich people, important place will have the access to the fresh water. And the opposite to the other side, they have to live with un cleaned water for years with no solutions on temporaly ways to change the water.
Finally, the best options in short term for this problems is providing knowdge to the people. Most of a extended Family which have more than 6 memebers having no experience about health and giving birth of the mother, the best way to make them understand is provide free lecture about rightful population of a family. For instance, in Bejing, China, used to be one of the highest place of giving birth to a chilal in one famliy in the world in the past time. But recently, the percentage has been deduct to minimal because of the policy and authorities action which provide help and knowlegde for their people.
To sum up, there is no pernament plans to overcame the problem of fresh water but by providing haed efforts on support and action for the citizens, the fresh water might no longer be a issue for a important place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with no solutions upfornt. Part of the world right now have to deal with no fre...
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Suggestion: where; we
...le in New Deli, India, their population were explore which split the city into 2 par...
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Suggestion: explored
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Suggestion: these
...lly, the best options in short term for this problems is providing knowdge to the pe...
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Suggestion: an
...roviding knowdge to the people. Most of a extended Family which have more than 6 ...
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...as been deduct to minimal because of the policy and authorities action which prov...
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in short, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5818815331 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32340702508 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7680539927 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.153846154 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138656445447 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530076857032 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397018794628 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926866985448 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169610107679 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.