you have met an old friends in another city on your last business trip in same city and want to meet him again
write a letter to your friend and say to meet him again.
express your exitement about last meeting.
give detail about your new business trip
suggest an arrangement to meet again.
dear deep
I am delighted to tell you about again my business trip in your city.I am happy about our last meeting when we met with each others suddenly.It was a fabalous day in my life.We enjoyed a lot during last meeting.
I am pleased to inform you about my one week trip in your city.Here,i will attend a seminar which could be fruitful for my company to develop new stetargy regarding marketing.It is held at Taj hotel.The timing of seminar is 10-12 pm.
After that for whole day,i am completely free from work responsiblities so i have decided to meet you again.You are very familiar about this city so please you could arrange a beautiful palace for meeting and enjoy fun and frolic activities with each others.It also provide great oppourtunities for great emusement.Apart from it,we could also enjoy delicious dishes.
I hope you understand my exictement about meeting and arrange it very soon.
I look forword hearing from you soon.
With best regards
Gagan.
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- you have met an old friends in another city on your last business trip in same city and want to meet him again write a letter to your friend and say to meet him again express your exitement about last meeting give detail about your new business trip sugge 78
we met with each others
we met each other
It also provide great oppourtunities
It also provides great opportunities
I look forword hearing from you soon.
I look foreword to hearing from you soon.
You are very familiar about this city so please you could arrange a beautiful palace for meeting and enjoy fun and frolic activities with each others.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and others
Sentence: I am delighted to tell you about again my business trip in your city.I am happy about our last meeting when we met with each others suddenly.It was a fabalous day in my life.We enjoyed a lot during last meeting.
Error: fabalous Suggestion: fabulous
Sentence: I am pleased to inform you about my one week trip in your city.Here,i will attend a seminar which could be fruitful for my company to develop new stetargy regarding marketing.It is held at Taj hotel.The timing of seminar is 10-12 pm.
Error: stetargy Suggestion: ?
Sentence: After that for whole day,i am completely free from work responsiblities so i have decided to meet you again.You are very familiar about this city so please you could arrange a beautiful palace for meeting and enjoy fun and frolic activities with each others.It also provide great oppourtunities for great emusement.Apart from it,we could also enjoy delicious dishes.
Error: oppourtunities Suggestion: opportunities
Error: emusement Suggestion: amusement
Error: responsiblities Suggestion: responsibilities
Sentence: I hope you understand my exictement about meeting and arrange it very soon.
Error: exictement Suggestion: excitement
Sentence: I look forword hearing from you soon.
Error: forword Suggestion: forward
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 178 200
No. of Characters: 778 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.653 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.371 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.444 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 45 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.821 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.439 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.323 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4