Dear Mr. Peter,
Recently, I have purchased the furniture set through online from your company against the invoice number A204. I am writing here to let you know the quality of the product as well as the behavioral issue of the staff toward the client.
I had ordered the full bedroom set along with the sofa-set brown in color. which was completely different from the ordered one and delivered a month a delay in the placement of order. Secondly, quality was very poor. To explain, complete surface of furniture has been scratched.In addition, the behaviour of staff was found very ignorant toward the client. For instance, they simply placed the material in the corner of the bedroom and run away from the location, which was completely unacceptable.
Considering the above, I would be grateful if you could give me a full refund or replace the complete furniture at the earliest.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Alexander
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: brown
...ull bedroom set along with the sofa-set brown in color. which was completely different from th...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...along with the sofa-set brown in color. which was completely different from the order...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...surface of furniture has been scratched.In addition, the behaviour of staff was fo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03726708075 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63043294932 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639751552795 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6971394945 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140223129463 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537652606115 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409899420392 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963739165296 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318405793017 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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