Nowadays, crime has crossed all its limits and standing as a major issue in front of the world. It is the biggest enemy of our society as well as humanity. This essay will brief about why the crime rate is continually increasing and what can be done to control it.
Owing to fulfill the greediness, some high-class businessman as well as politicians playing with the humanity and enforced people to perform the criminal activities. For instance, greedy politicians while election paying a good amount to local criminal to do the violence over the road to make their vote bank strong. Similarly, businessman bribing the government officers to win the tenders. Furthermore, flexibility in law and order really aiding the criminals to save their lives as well as motivating them to perform more crimes, since they will get easily rid off due to the leak poles in the system.
These things are nothing but an enemy which is continually weakening the countries.For instance, some terrorist group exporting the drugs and arms to enhance the terrorist activities and weaken the strength of the nation. Moreover, some sage acting as a true follower of god and executing the drug trafficking as well as arms trafficking secretly.
It's vital to stop the criminal activities at the earliest and can happen only by amending the law and order. For example, As per law in some countries, stones are showered over the rapist until his death as well as in some countries drug traffickers will be convicted whole life in jail. Moreover, since childhood, parents, as well as teachers, should be more vigilant over the children and make them understand about the crime as well as about their consequences.
In a nutshell, it is clear that parents and government plays a vital role in controlling the crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00996677741 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76879555937 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.512056986 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163460367859 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05656150917 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103486070834 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881594202466 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10856694498 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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