Although the government is spending the huge amount in public sectors, it is quite essential to spend money on arts as well. Some people might discord with this claim, however, I absolutely concur with this perspective and will provide the justifications and evidence in this essay to validate my bird's eye view.
To embark upon, spending money on public sectors such as education, hospital, transportation should always be preferable because excellent public services is a sign of healthy and wealthy nation which is a sign of prestige. Owing to lack of good public facilities nation will become weak and standing as deaf and dumb in front of other nations. To elaborate, to make the tree strong, it is essential to pour the sufficient quantity of water in the root, similarly, excellent services are acting as water for our nation.
On the other hand, art is having a direct relationship with our mind and heart and acting as a stress reliever.For instance, some people listening to the music or playing a musical instrument to relieve their stress. Furthermore, annually huge amount of funding has been generating with various music concerts and movies, which is really helping the nation to make the more funding in public sectors, so it should be taken care well.
In my opinion, both arts and public services must be taken care well by the government. Both are essential for the growth of the human and nation, Moreover, both are vice versa of each other.
In a nutshell, it is crystal clear that to make the nation strong funding should be in both sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, similarly, so, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92481203008 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65081050135 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9803883861 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165905377412 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614822328571 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503014803914 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834015966112 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681775376461 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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