You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart demonstrates the weekly download rates of three computer packages, namely ActiveX, Java, and Net during five weeks. Overall, all these computer programs had an increase in the download times. Among the three packages, ActiveX had the highest download rates, whilst Net had the least figures in the five-week period.
It is clear that both ActiveX and Java had similar pattern since the period experienced a gradual increase in downloads. These two products had an upward trend in the next four weeks. In particular, in the first week, the number of times ActiveX downloaded stood at approximately 75,000, which was about 3,000 times more than that of Java. Then, downloads of ActiveX rose from around 90,000 times in week 2 to over 120,000 times in week 4 with the exception of a slight decrease of 10,000 times in week 3. Meanwhile, Java experienced a steady growth in the download rate from nearly 50,000 times in week 2 and finished the period at 80,000 times.
Unlikely, Net was the least favorable product among the three, stood at approximately 38,000 times of download. Then, the second week witnessed a slight decline of about 18,000 times and hit the lowest point at 15,000 times. However, Net had an incredible rise in the last two weeks and finished at 50,000 times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...se computer programs had an increase in the download times. Among the three packages, Active...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
... week 2 to over 120,000 times in week 4 with the exception of a slight decrease of 10,000 times in we...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...le, Java experienced a steady growth in the download rate from nearly 50,000 times in week 2...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...two weeks and finished at 50,000 times.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, then, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93607305936 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47855631036 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543378995434 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4663477809 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2727272727 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208881060421 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947993613516 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672801371229 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155596426117 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385547860987 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.