The provided bar graph reveals information about number of times the three computer packages were downloaded from the internet over a period of five weeks.
From the given data, it is crystal clear that Activex is downloaded most in each week followed by java and net. During week 1, Activex was downloaded 78,000 times while java and net was downloaded 42,000 and 38,000 times respectively. In 2nd week, the usage of activex and java increased by 10,000 while the usage of net decreased to 30,000. Third week followed the same trend with slight increase in usage of java and over 1lakh users of activex whereas only 20,000 used net. However, in 4th week there was a dramatic increase in downloading of net that was 40,000 and the usage of activex decreased by 10,000. In the 5th week activex was downloaded over 120,000 times , java was downloaded over 80,000 times and net was downloaded near about 50,000 times.
At the end, it can be concluded that activex was downloaded most of the times through out the 5 weeks followed by java and net.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 670, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ctivex was downloaded over 120,000 times , java was downloaded over 80,000 times a...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ctivex was downloaded most of the times through out the 5 weeks followed by java and net.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'third', 'whereas', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280612244898 0.268076937826 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.147959183673 0.116061578633 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0561224489796 0.0759168565197 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0255102040816 0.0366838410393 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0102040816327 0.0131127313244 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.183673469388 0.155750635184 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0816326530612 0.0379272487307 215% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.3894844632 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00510204081633 0.0210936926555 24% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0765306122449 0.0948980150116 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00510204081633 0.00437022459523 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00510204081633 0.00967000014798 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1047.0 1161.00487805 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.9 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72131147541 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295081967213 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218579234973 0.247514529752 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142076502732 0.171178102325 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0819672131148 0.112407865282 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3894844632 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497267759563 0.546246751206 91% => OK
Word variations: 41.3959751712 49.3433353143 84% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.875 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 15.3602571593 42.9750493124 36% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 135.714022679 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 44.7329234973 47.7609492067 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.97222222222 2.94281807926 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428442001788 0.418131533498 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.243476097565 0.181151798455 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0842679909896 0.0850326197045 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.726461125283 0.706616315825 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174807591638 0.157042692854 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.268140503826 0.228904883108 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132023961463 0.108899403657 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307287556757 0.367819155151 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.101098601891 0.0812612215331 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.409931134319 0.316326947829 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115357506132 0.0921553760075 125% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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