You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagram shows the design of a modern landfill for household waste Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 w

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram shows the design of a modern landfill for household waste. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Design of a modern landfill for household waste is becoming popularly in nowadays. That is a progess how designing a modern landfill for household waste.

Fisrtly, construction need to dig a big hole in area. We will call it is man-made hole. Secondly, we wil put in some sythenic substances sush as drainage pipes, drainage tank in the hole and set to the building a little bit of clay. Next, we must take every household waste to pour in man-made hole. In household waste has several materials like wate-liquid and some trashes in there. Finally, and the most impoprtant step, we must mixed waste-liquid to become a natural rock. Then, we will fill up a man-made hole by the clay on the surface to finish this design. In addition, we should make pipes beside hole to contains gases.

This is a great design. Maybe, in the future, it will to become a solution for enviromental pollution in the world

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...r household waste is becoming popularly in nowadays. That is a progess how designing a mode...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...k in the hole and set to the building a little bit of clay. Next, we must take every house...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'contain'.
Suggestion: contain
...on, we should make pipes beside hole to contains gases. This is a great design. Maybe...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, second, secondly, so, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70440251572 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66585071176 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8341480336 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3333333333 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.25 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148712600644 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069068962947 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687836668747 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128823092143 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770139214976 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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