You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 15

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The given diagram illustrates how many percentage and the number of internet users in 10 differents nation in 2016.
What stands out from the diagram is that while China and India were the nation which have many people, the highest percentage of internet user were UK and Japan. Furthermore, both India, Nigeria and Mexico have the percentage no more than a half.
In 2016, China and India was the highest for internet users with 721,434,547 and 462,124,989, respectively. In contrast, both Nigeria, Germany, UK and Mexico had the number of imternet users no more than 100 millions and specially for Mexico with 58,016,997. In term of percentage of population, while Japan and UK were the highest, at 91,1 and 92,6 percents, respectively, India had the lowest with roughly 35%. Both remaining 7 nations had the figure between 90 and 40 percents.
Besides, China and Indian were still largest for total population with about more than 1,3 billions. While other countries had the number more than 100 millions with lowest was Japan with around 126 millions of people, Both Germany and UK witnessed no more than 90 miilions, at 80,682,151 and 65,111,143, respectively.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (2 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2023-10-06 Giang Tran 11 view
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic
Essays by user Giang Tran :
>>> more essays by the user >>>

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percentage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many percentages'.
Suggestion: many percentages
The given diagram illustrates how many percentage and the number of internet users in 10 ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...mber of internet users in 10 differents nation in 2016. What stands out from the diag...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d specially for Mexico with 58,016,997. In term of percentage of population, while...
^^
Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '126 million'.
Suggestion: 126 million
...lions with lowest was Japan with around 126 millions of people, Both Germany and UK witnessed n...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, still, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08854166667 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7083683892 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6775502411 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0561043044742 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288790337944 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245196765255 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437794396654 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186007318706 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percentage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many percentages'.
Suggestion: many percentages
The given diagram illustrates how many percentage and the number of internet users in 10 ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...mber of internet users in 10 differents nation in 2016. What stands out from the diag...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d specially for Mexico with 58,016,997. In term of percentage of population, while...
^^
Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '126 million'.
Suggestion: 126 million
...lions with lowest was Japan with around 126 millions of people, Both Germany and UK witnessed n...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, still, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08854166667 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7083683892 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6775502411 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0561043044742 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288790337944 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245196765255 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437794396654 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186007318706 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.