The line graph illustrates average price of the monthly payments for 4 different mobile phone brands namely Domo, Lex, Sim TX, Alpha in Europe over the period of 9 month in2022, measured in euros.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the expenditure every month for D,L,A surged relatively over the period shown. In addition, the monthly price of the Alpha mobile phone company was the cheapest at the beginning. However, it went up dramatically and became the most expensive brand in September 2022.
In January 2022, everybody had to pay 15 euros to able to used Domo service, the highest pee. Meanwhile, expenditure for Alpha company was the lowest with only 5 euros. There was a relative stability in the price of Alpha company during the first 5 month be4 a jump to 25 euros in September, which made Alpha the most expensive types. After having paid the highest price most of the time given, Domo’s users witness a slight decrease to about 23 euros by September which the second after Alpha
Starting at abt 12 euros in January, L was the second most expensive company in comparison with the other three. In the cost of monthly contrast there was an upward trend to about 18 euros in September. During the first 6 month the number of Sim TX users rose peak at 14 euros. After that it reduce by just under the first point about 8 in the last month.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...amely Domo, Lex, Sim TX, Alpha in Europe over the period of 9 month in2022, measu...
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Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , L
...n that the expenditure every month for D,L,A surged relatively over the period sho...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ice of Alpha company during the first 5 month be4 a jump to 25 euros in September, wh...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y September which the second after Alpha Starting at abt 12 euros in January, L ...
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Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...after Alpha Starting at abt 12 euros in January, L was the second most expens...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... euros in September. During the first 6 month the number of Sim TX users rose peak at...
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Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of Sim TX users rose peak at 14 euros. After that it reduce by just under the first ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62396694215 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35707130227 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553719008264 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.918368014 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.727272727 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194810670656 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785142283666 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066179053329 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141665605615 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732608024519 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.