You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by lordwind on Wed, 08/21/2019 - 12:38

The pie graph illustrates how many percentage of the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

Overall, health and fitness, less pollution are two main reasons for cycling to work, while people who drive to work prefer selecting comfort and distance to work as the largest percentage of reasons.

A glance to the chart provided reveals that health and pollution have been receiving a great deal of people who are cycling to work, thereby making these factors become the first rank, at 30%. These are twice as much as that of no parking problems. Meanwhile, no costs and faster than driving are the least selected for people who go to work by bicycle, with 13% and 12% respectively.

Not surprisingly, people show more their interest in comfort, the figure for this reason is 40%, which is nearly double than that of distance to work. Although, people do not choose to much for reasons about faster than cycling and carrying things to work, these factors still hold third rank together, at same percentage (14%). Certainly, the reason about safer than cycling is by far the smallest of all sectors.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percentage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many percentages'.
Suggestion: many percentages
The pie graph illustrates how many percentage of the reasons why people travel to wor...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...to work. Although, people do not choose to much for reasons about faster than cycl...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, still, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84375 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3999963831 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5772580535 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216330355062 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990585207055 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624964492336 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150081509302 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479695226857 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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