Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologisedescribe what action you will takeYou should write at least 150 words

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

explain the reasons for the noise

apologise

describe what action you will take

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. and Mrs. John,

I hope you are keeping well?.

I am writing to acknowledge the receipt of your letter regarding the disturbance from my flat for the past three days.

As you well know, the bathroom is on the first floor in the apartment and recently, I noticed a leak in my sitting room ceiling. The plumber has checked and found out that the bathroom pipe was broken and needed to be fixed urgently to avoid subsequent damage to the ceiling. Hence, the loud sounds coming from my apartment. The repairs were estimated to take at most three days but unfortunately, it is lingering longer than expected.

I humbly wish to apologize for all the inconvenience the noise has caused you. I am also sorry for not contacting you before the commencement of the repairs to intimate you on what you might experience as a result.

I have advised the plumber to work only in the mornings between the hours of 8 am-12pm when you will be at the office so as not to cause a nuisance when you are resting with your family.

I am deeply sorry for all the bother caused.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you might experience as a result. I have advised the plumber to work only i...
^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you are resting with your family. I am deeply sorry for all the bother caus...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, regarding, so, well, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58461538462 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54936276216 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620512820513 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.928405427 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2727272727 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249134131045 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778082911493 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732061666272 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103986463732 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804332801413 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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