Respected Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to you for raising my trouble regard your transport .I am regular user of your transportation and take your buses to reach my office daily. However, other commuters and me are having to face some problems because of your bad bus service.
Firstly, I would like to explain that I am worker and daily I have to go to my job early in the morning around 8 am. Hence ,I take bus to reach my office but unfortunately, last one week, it did not come at proper time and I had to wait more than an hour. Finally, I do not get a seat to sit because of congestion in the bus and it takes a lot of time to the destinations.
Hence, I would like to give you some suggestions, which can be taken by you for the ameliorate of bus service. Firstly, you should arrange the more buses for this route. In addition, the number of seats should be increased by you to make the journey more convenient.
I look forward to hear from you about the solution of this trouble.
Yours faithfully,
Arshdeep singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to you for rais...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...raising my trouble regard your transport .I am regular user of your transportation...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ising my trouble regard your transport .I am regular user of your transportation ...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... early in the morning around 8 am. Hence ,I take bus to reach my office but unfort...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...gestions, which can be taken by you for the ameliorate of bus service. Firstly, you should arr...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...rney more convenient. I look forward to hear from you about the solution of this tro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40206185567 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58362116227 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3894914199 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124283951771 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461626461728 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637403626828 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535535361906 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928310194967 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.