Dear Mr. Johnson
My name is Blesson and I am a tutor at St. Sebastian's college. I just moved to the home next to yours. I am a bachelor and will be single occupant of the house for the time being. I am extremely happy to found a place in this locality as it is the safest and nature friendly residential area in this vicinity, away from city life's.
I am planning to organise a party on the coming Sunday evening from 5:00 pm to 7:00 pm at my place. Party will begin at around 5:15 pm, with prayer and religious rituals by a priest. There will be live music after that followed by the dinner at 6:30 pm. I will try my best to keep the noise under control, however, I would like to extend my sincere apologies in advance just in case you get disturbed.
I would be delighted if you could join us at the party, as I can assure that you will have a good time and also it will be a perfect opportunity to know more about each other.
I look forward to meet you at the party.
Yours sincerely
Blesson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cupant of the house for the time being. I am extremely happy to found a place in ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...this vicinity, away from city lifes. I am planning to organise a party on the ...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...unity to know more about each other. I look forward to meet you at the party. ...
^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...ore about each other. I look forward to meet you at the party. Yours sincerely B...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18367346939 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2759448656 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1503661152 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969655068395 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482257462751 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575129294023 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494431056113 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100140188422 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.