10. A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Dear Rita,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health. It has been a long time since we have met, due to our sedentary lifestyle. Remember last month when you visited to my place you borrowed American Tourist's red suitcase as you were unable to pack all your clothes and gifts in one bag and you needed extra luggage.
You will be delighted to know that I am going to Paris on work visa for three years on 23rd September and because I am carrying some important and confidential documents with me, I will be requiring that suitcase. Undoubtedly, the suitcase has many advantages and safety features. Firstly, it has a bar code lock and many hidden pockets which will help me to safely keep all the papers. Secondly, it is made of waterproof leather which will protect the documents.
My sister Julie is visiting your town on 19th September and will be back by 21st September. Kindly hand over the suitcase to her on airport by 5pm. As she is boarding Air India Flight at 8 pm and her contact details are 9844556633.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours Lovingly,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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- The growing number of overweight people s putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involve. Some people that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school cur 56
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy The benefits of nuclear technology far out weight the disadvantages Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rita, I hope this letter finds you in the best...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59390862944 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48367080765 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695431472081 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.283911572 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4166666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162813603483 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493785057111 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386596258784 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931419126088 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386867082267 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.