1. Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
1. Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Over packaging of the products have become a trend these days and also a medium to attract consumers with more attractive packaging. Following this trend producers often forget the detrimental effects it has on both environment and consumers, which is one of the main concerns because of which the consumers need to make an informed decision about the products they buy.
Packaging’s can often be deceiving, and lead customers to have an utterly contrasting view about the product than what it actually is. Over packing increases the price of the product which is then again taken from the consumers. There have been cases where the cost of packaging is more than the cost of the product itself. Moreover, manufacturers often use non-disposable wrappers and packets which adds to the effects on the environment.
There are some reasonable arguments in favour of over packaging as well, because the more attractive a package looks these days the more people prefer it and hence packaging becomes a significant factor for selling more. Survey suggests that sales have increased by seventeen percent just because of attractive packaging for many companies. Also, for keeping some products intact and fresh it is sometimes necessary to use over packaging, for example, in the case of some biscuit packs, we can see that the biscuits are placed in the small plastic tray and covered with multiple layers of packets. In such cases manufacturers can argue stating that over packaging is being done for the benefit of customers.
In the end, undoubtedly, extra packaging of products has a detrimental effect on the society; however, consumers should avoid over-packaged products to solve the negative effects it possessed to them and to the environment which will in turn clout manufacturers to change the way they are packing products.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-02-06 | Ammu helen | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 937.175257732 184% => OK
No of words: 332.0 206.0 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19879518072 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91335135663 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539156626506 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 290.88556701 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5800897448 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 76.5299724578 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 16.8248392259 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467420061647 0.216113520407 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176346379699 0.0766984524023 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.255729907428 0.0603063233224 424% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337844376598 0.12726935374 265% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.33366887922 0.0580467560999 575% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 41.2886597938 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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