Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Harry,
I Hope you and Sally have enjoyed the Christmas party last night! I'm writing to you to inform that I will not be joining you to watch the movie Ford vs Ferrari on
on the new year's day at Luxe IMAX.
We made this plan well in advance, however, I wont be able to make it for the movie as I have a doctor's appointment on that day for my mother-in-law.
You know very well, my mother-in-law is suffering from Kidney ailment, my husband and I were trying to get an appointment with Dr.Spencer for quite sometime, who is renewed
a renowned Nephrologist in the country, and we do not want to miss this opportunity.
I realize you spent 700 rupees for two tickets to book it in IMAX for a better movie watching experience. My friend Ana is a big fan of Formula 1 sport, and
she is interested to watch this movie as the whole story plot is around F1 race. I informed Ana about my true situation and she is okay to accompany you on
behalf of me and she will pay 350 rupees for her ticket.
I hope you are fine with watching this movie along with Ana. My sincere apologies for not being able to join you this time. Looking forward to seeing you in the
Matt's wedding on 3rd January 2020.
Regards,
Yadha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...enjoyed the Christmas party last night! Im writing to you to inform that I will no...
^^
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou to watch the movie Ford vs Ferrari on on the new years day at Luxe IMAX. ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...o watch the movie Ford vs Ferrari on on the new years day at Luxe IMAX. We...
^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
... movie Ford vs Ferrari on on the new years day at Luxe IMAX. We made this pla...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 97, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...le to make it for the movie as I have a doctors appointment on that day for my mother-i...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Spencer
...re trying to get an appointment with Dr.Spencer for quite sometime, who is renewed a...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...encer for quite sometime, who is renewed a renowned Nephrologist in the country, ...
^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...r for quite sometime, who is renewed a renowned Nephrologist in the country, a...
^
Line 21, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Ana is a big fan of Formula 1 sport, and she is interested to watch this movie as...
^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...is a big fan of Formula 1 sport, and she is interested to watch this movie as th...
^^^
Line 23, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion and she is okay to accompany you on behalf of me and she will pay 350 rupees...
^^^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Behalf
... and she is okay to accompany you on behalf of me and she will pay 350 rupees for h...
^^^^^^
Line 29, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me. Looking forward to seeing you in the Matts wedding on 3rd January 2020. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42424242424 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45973553608 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601731601732 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9583680759 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.555555556 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222940733943 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934307336746 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479038921509 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804772732819 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780673576512 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.