2. Your friend is moving to your neighbourhood next weekend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- offer to help your friend move
- Explain when and how you can help
- give them some useful information about the local area
Dear John,
How are you? How is family? I am happy about your decision to move to my neighborhood. Anyway I would be glad to be your neighbour and offer my services as much as I can.
Thankfully, I am on a two-weeks-annual leave from work, therefore, I have enough time at hand. This means that assisting you to move your luggage would not be a problem.
Although I had the intention to travel to the United States but I will change my plans and make myself available for fourteen days. Since you know how much strength I have, why don't you just assign the heavy duties to me? Carrying furniture wouldn't be a hassle at all.
By the way, have you heard a few things about this lucky neighborhood? Although it is known for its security but please avoid late-night movement because of the recent robberies that occurred. Luckily, a new superintendent has been assigned and he can be contacted anytime.
Anyway let me know what you think about my offer.
Your friend,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... you know how much strength I have, why dont you just assign the heavy duties to me?...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... heavy duties to me? Carrying furniture wouldnt be a hassle at all. By the way, have...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, therefore, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65142857143 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71055984879 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1694457141 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.1428571429 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226475452186 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091753719081 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114024313906 0.0603063233224 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102923705252 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860640618738 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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