21.09.2017 You have travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened.
Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it.
Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir.Madam,
I am writing in hope that my suitcase which got lost from the cargo luggage of Indian Airlineshas been found. I am waiting from last 5 days for a reply from customer care executives, but every effort of mine is going in-vain. I have already logged an online complaint with the authority , i doubt that anything is done till now.
To summarise, this is 10Litres capacity suitcase, with digital lock opening comination and a bug brown handle to lift it, please mind that there was no strip attached to help it to caary it on the shoulder.there were differnet articles kept inside, firstly i had kept imported perfumes, my formal clothes and a leather jacket alongside.On the top layer i have kept my documents, laptop , its charger and powerbank.
Moreover , i tried contacting the authorities several times, but they have there standard replies and no new investigation ifnormation is shared with me. I read on your website about standard procedure protocol, you are bound to share each and every inevestiation outcomes via email. Nothing has happened till now, is there anything that could be done or i there is any other porcedure you are going to follow.
hoping for a positive reply soon.
Yours faithfully,
Gaurav Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Madam
Dear Sir.Madam, I am writing in hope that my suitcase...
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Line 2, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d an online complaint with the authority , i doubt that anything is done till now....
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n online complaint with the authority , i doubt that anything is done till now. ...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...here was no strip attached to help it to caary it on the shoulder.there were diff...
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Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...differnet articles kept inside, firstly i had kept imported perfumes, my formal c...
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Line 4, column 338, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
... clothes and a leather jacket alongside.On the top layer i have kept my documents,...
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Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...p layer i have kept my documents, laptop , its charger and powerbank. Moreover ...
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Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., its charger and powerbank. Moreover , i tried contacting the authorities seve...
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Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ts charger and powerbank. Moreover , i tried contacting the authorities severa...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hoping
...r porcedure you are going to follow. hoping for a positive reply soon. Yours faith...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99043062201 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77048263804 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712918660287 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.142229294 44.8134815571 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151660306984 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542911072191 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235494773544 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661922637417 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433039828515 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.