3. You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine:
- Correct the information in the article
- Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
- Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to inaccurate information in your recent article about Quang Binh province.
First of all, I was very pleased when there was an article with many stunning photos about my hometown on such a globally famous travel magazine, that would help to acknowledge my town to global tourists. Unfortunately, I noticed that it had a significantly error about the beach festival’s timeline which gets started next month. It was informed in your post that our beach festival will be held from 15th June to the end of August, howerver, it actually starts from 1 June to 20th July.
I believe that many tourists would love to join the festival, so the incorrect schedule might affect them, not only their plan to join festival activities but also their experience about the town. Moreover, our town could lose a number of visitors during the event.
I would like to suggest that you should make an announcement about the mistake on the front page which will be published in the next magazine. It should also be posted on your social platform so that it can reach as many as visitors.
I hope you will have a prompt action for this.
Yours faithfully,
My Nguyen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('error') instead of another adjective.
...s. Unfortunately, I noticed that it had a significantly error about the beach festival’s timeline whi...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erver, it actually starts from 1 June to 20th July. I believe that many touri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84360189573 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59465579968 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644549763033 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1433285695 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223983511357 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768285195369 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515408111599 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119805815983 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557538928883 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.