Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and exercise every day will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the causes and solutions?
Old people need a lot of care, both mentally and physically: they need to be socialized and active for a happier and healthier life. However, modern society seems to forget about how it should treat its own senior citizen, they are being abandoned. Thus, many old souls are suffering from solitariness and health problems. This issue should be investigated carefully and here are what I found.
There is no doubt that the current lifestyle is busier than ever, and people hardly have any time for their elders. Moreover, many people choose to move out, sometimes to a new city or even a new country in search of better opportunities, that makes visiting their elder a luxury. Consequently, they left them in loneliness, all by their own.
Staying in solidarity has another problem: it’s hard for old people to keep in shape. Just imagine, staying all alone without any interaction with their juniors could lead to mental sickness and depression. This in turn keeps them inside of their house, hardly do any exercise, hence damage their physical health. Furthermore, the sad truth is many seniors do not care about their own health anymore.
Finding a way to solve this issue is the responsibility of not only the government but also each person. First, the government needs to create programs that encourage its own senior to go out more and be active. For example, the authority could create health and fitness clubs for old people, organize meet-up, or arrange some part-time jobs that both good for mentally and physically well-being. Besides, people should spend more time with their elders, take them out for diner, take them out for a walk or just spend the evening with them is a great start. After all, the most important thing for a human being is their family.
In conclusion, elderlies are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness is a result of being alone. To combat this, both the government and each person need to act for the welfare of their seniors. Only by doing so, people could age gracefully and live a full life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, after all, for example, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85428571429 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52324539967 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7124881306 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4210526316 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168792591777 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571199827682 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661491145709 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103471374666 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433200320692 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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