After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.In your letter:•Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing•Express your appreci

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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
• Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
• Express your appreciation
• And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Dear Ms. Anh,

My name is Truong Nguyen, who was a patient at Trauma division of District 11 Hospital last month. As you have already known that I got into the hospital because of a motorbike accident, in which I broke my right leg. It was the most painful experience I had ever had in my life. Luckily, with your outstanding nursing skills and hospitality, I found my condition improved with an incredible speed. Therefore, I am writing this letter to express my gratitude and give you my thanks.

During my time at the hospital, you were the nurse who gave me the best care compared to the others. Thus, I am very thankful and appreciated for helping me recover in the most positive way. Also, if you have spare time, please come join me and my family in our dinner some time on the weekends. My mother is a great cook and I can assure that you will have a wonderful dinner as a way to show my appreciation.

I am looking forward to receiving your response soon.

Yours sincerely,
Truong Nguyen

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52459016393 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57006102111 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661202185792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2915751265 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2727272727 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187235739741 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752772825087 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538154786879 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118840703949 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160184308073 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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