Dear Sam,
Hope you are doing well. I am Venkata Saikiran Kattekola, whom you saved by responding quickly after an accident. I am writing this to convey my thanks to you for looking after me.
I actually work at a consulting firm and was on my way to the office. My car broke down suddenly and I parked it to the right side of the road when a truck hit me from the back. I felt unconscious at the moment and woke up back in the hospital. I was informed by the hospital staff on how you handled the situation by calling an ambulance at the spot.
My entire family whole-heartedly would like to appreciate for all your efforts. I definitely could not imagine my life if you were not there at that moment.
I would like to invite you for a dinner at my home this weekend. We stay at 1881 Brunswick Street, Halifax and I am reachable at: 902-229-9770. You can call me once you reach here.
I can’t wait to see you seen.
Yours faithfully,
Venkata Saikiran Kattekola.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y thanks to you for looking after me. I actually work at a consulting firm and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40883977901 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62782550145 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.359327115 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.0 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243503712505 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927382486004 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718766989278 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120084839558 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874147542564 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.41 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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