The world has advanced a lot with the technology and both men and women are working to run the household. While few people argue that the men should take the responsibility of earning and the women will take care of the home needs. This essay will discuss both the views and will incline towards the statement that it is responsibility of both the spouses to work and earn money.
Some of the traditional families have a notion that the women are meant to take care of children being at home. They oppose the view of the ladies going to offices and work. Also, few people are in favor of women taking the sole responsibility of household chores. Such families follow the tradition of women cooking food, running the errands at home. This culture has been deeply rooted into the families and the trend is slowly changing these days.
On the flip side, most of the people now-a-days are preferring to both the spouse working mode. Firstly, this is due to the inflation, it is becoming quite essential that the husband and wife go to work to earn sufficient money to run the family. People are accustomed to sophisticated life style using modern equipment and in order to spend the money they need more income. In addition to this, the perspective of the people has changed to give the equal opportunities to both men and women in all the fields. There is no point of gender bias irrespective of the sector these days. Women has also advanced a lot and are taking top positions as CEOs and pilots. Men got accustomed to share the household responsibilities equally with women.
In conclusion, although it is followed by many families since ages to men working to earn money and women limited to working for home the perspective has been changed. It is very essential that both the spouses take equal responsibilities in earning and taking care of the house considering all the above situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...h the spouses to work and earn money. Some of the traditional families have a notion that...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...lip side, most of the people now-a-days are preferring to both the spouse working mode. Firstl...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to sharing'.
Suggestion: accustomed to sharing
...p positions as CEOs and pilots. Men got accustomed to share the household responsibilities equally ...
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Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e considering all the above situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73111782477 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66258286008 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480362537764 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8142105356 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1176470588 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156546948014 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527676949205 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457144546731 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114951466784 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440590558278 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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