Dear Shyam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the health problem that I have been experiencing in the recent past due to the office working conditions. It has been more than two weeks and I am still recovering from the ill-health.
I consulted the doctor and got to know that I am suffering from cold and flu. I was on fluids for a week and started recovering since then. I hope the conditions would get better soon by next week for me to join back to work.
I suspect that the temperature control machine was not working for more than a month. The central temperature that was set was very low and I have been experiencing extreme cold conditions to work in the office. As you know we have a lot of meetings to attend and it is becoming quite uncomfortable to continue to work for longer hours.
I request you to look into this issue and get the temperature control machine to be repaired.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Venkata Saikiran Kattekola.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...week and started recovering since then. I hope the conditions would get better so...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t week for me to join back to work. I suspect that the temperature control ma...
^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Venkata Saikiran Kattekola.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, still, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51111111111 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63478628458 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3413568112 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8181818182 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296795464495 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980050599699 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107755318142 0.0603063233224 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120228398552 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116863852528 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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