Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear Mr. Albert,
I am writing in connection with the computer course which was posted in our college. My name is Doaa Okaila. I am studying dentistry at Prince Sultan University " beside the computer campus " I would explain to you my interest to join the course. In other words, It was my dream to attend many courses and workshops related to the computer device.
I notice that this course only for students who finished the elementary course. But unfortunately, I am not. Because I have plenty of exams, assignments, and research project submission. I could not be able to take any specialty except dentistry. However, I have the ability to adapt my self with that course which will start on the next coming Monday and already my vacation will start on Sunday as well.
I would be grateful if you could try to make an exception to me, in order to enroll in this course. I know it is considered a detrimental issue. So I promise you not to tell or inform anybody about your acceptance if it happened.
Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Doaa Okaila.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Albert, I am writing in connection with the comp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... vacation will start on Sunday as well. I would be grateful if you could try to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y about your acceptance if it happened. Looking forward to hearing from you at y...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Doaa Okaila.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78974358974 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68580900656 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7989847066 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7142857143 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247546849983 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631956218663 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571466286934 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130265872333 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222060179655 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.