Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in regard to the computer course that starts on October 18 at your education center. I would like to apply for it, but there is a problem with one of the requirements to candidates.
Computers have always been my passion since my childhood, when I both played computer games as well as learned how to fix them. However, I have never taken any courses relating to computing, because my father has always wanted me to follow in his footsteps and work as a plumber.
Now that I have reached the maturity, I intend to study computer science. Nevertheless, my qualifications do not meet the requirements of your course. It is said that the applicant must have a IT certificate at elementary level. Honestly, I do not have it. Having said that, I would be grateful, if you allow me to take this course without it.
It would be great, if you either contact me at the following number 87001444413 or send a message to my email address tolikxxx@mail.ru.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...hood, when I both played computer games as well as learned how to fix them. However, I hav...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 192, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: a; IT
...It is said that the applicant must have a IT certificate at elementary level. Honest...
^^^^
Line 13, column 197, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'certificates'?
Suggestion: certificates
... said that the applicant must have a IT certificate at elementary level. Honestly, I do not...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, if, nevertheless, well, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85227272727 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98216439751 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664772727273 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7793077651 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6363636364 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273214307459 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962898268437 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651484310106 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141654787465 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945233580956 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.