Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of your students. I am writing to you because I need your help and advice regarding the new computer course.
Firstly, I am studying at NBA collage from 3 years; I am looking to enrol in the new course of computer course which will be held on 1st August. I would like to inform you that I have good knowledge of computer skills.
Secondly, due to some obstacles, I could not take any previous course on computer science; I made self-study which helped me to acquire significant information at this filed. In addition to that, I worked part-time for 2 years at an accounting office, and I used to use a computer at work.
Finally, I will appreciate it if you can help me to Enroll for the coming course; I need to increase my experience in this field. I know that I did not take the elementary course; I promise you that I have sufficient information in that. I suggest that if made a test for me, It would be better; you can satisfy my knowledge.
I look forward to hearing from you; should you require any further information, you can contact me. Here is my Number: 5555878.
Thanks in advance.
Faithfully,
Ahmed Karem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of your s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vice regarding the new computer course. Firstly, I am studying at NBA collage fr...
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Line 6, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., and I used to use a computer at work. Finally, I will appreciate it if you can...
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Line 8, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e better; you can satisfy my knowledge. I look forward to hearing from you; shou...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r; you can satisfy my knowledge. I look forward to hearing from you; shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50462962963 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6780196538 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3641414053 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8461538462 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302087790993 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992024901989 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088356918915 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137830990064 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803603471217 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.