Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrollment officer, in your letter explain
a: why you are writing
b: describe your circumstances
c: asks if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear Enrollment Officer,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of health. I'm writing this letter to put forward my request for an upcoming program for networking students that is currently available on your website this program states that only students who have prior experience or completed the elementary course can participate in the course.
I am a professional working in sales and marketing but I am very much interested and enthusiastic to explore the field of IT as I can see new avenues and opportunities to diversify my profile and experience. I'm a quick learner who is keen to learn and grasp the knowledge and this course is suitable in terms of my ambitions and timing as I would have to complete it alongside my job.
I request you to allow me to join the course skipping the elementary course as I do not want to miss the opportunity I assure you that I will put in all the effort and will not let you down if the chance is given.
Regards
Zin Mark
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| 2023-12-15 | Amna Zeeshan | 78 | view |
| 2023-12-15 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
| 2023-11-23 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-30 | nijam | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-30 | nijam | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...letter finds you in the best of health. Im writing this letter to put forward my r...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...to diversify my profile and experience. Im a quick learner who is keen to learn an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57627118644 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74514652127 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.6668287936 44.8134815571 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 76.5299724578 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 16.8248392259 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277428395067 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105611925709 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744458793421 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131439691221 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894397615386 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.