You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
User
Dear Mark,
I intend to write this letter to seek support with respect to a course enrollment. Let me first share a context with you. I have read about a computer course that i deemed very important and relevant to my current degree at the college. I determine that i am going to learn many essential elements from that computer course that is surely going to help me achieve my goals in future.
However, i see a condition attached to that course. There is a pre-requisite that one should have completed an elementary course prior to enrollment to this computer course. Unfortunately, i have not done that elementary course; hence not able to enroll myself.
I would request your usual support in getting an exception for me from the management so that i can register myself for this informative course.
I look forward to your outright and swift response.
Sincerely,
Sam give a score from IELTS General Task-1 category and share your remarks for improvement
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| 2023-12-15 | Amna Zeeshan | 78 | view |
| 2023-12-15 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
| 2023-11-23 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-30 | nijam | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-30 | nijam | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
User Dear Mark, I intend to write this letter to seek su...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... have read about a computer course that i deemed very important and relevant to m...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...degree at the college. I determine that i am going to learn many essential elemen...
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Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...urely going to help me achieve my goals in future. However, i see a condition attached ...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... achieve my goals in future. However, i see a condition attached to that course...
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Line 6, column 95, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tion for me from the management so that i can register myself for this informativ...
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Line 10, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...right and swift response. Sincerely, Sam give a score from IELTS General T...
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Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and swift response. Sincerely, Sam give a score from IELTS General Task-1 c...
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Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Sam) must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...swift response. Sincerely, Sam give a score from IELTS General Task-1 categ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90963855422 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73048440242 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6017759132 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22965277897 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775505886594 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732126302971 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877631594247 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807918007715 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.