You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Sam,
Subject: Request for Course Enrollment Exception
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to seek your support regarding a matter of great importance to my academic and professional development.
Upon researching the available courses, I came across a computer course that I believe is highly relevant to my current degree at the college. The content of this course aligns perfectly with my career goals, and I am eager to gain the knowledge and skills it offers.
However, I have encountered an obstacle in the form of a prerequisite for enrollment. It is stated that one must have completed an elementary course before being eligible for enrollment in the computer course I am interested in. Unfortunately, I have not undertaken this elementary course, making me ineligible to register.
Understanding the importance of adhering to course requirements, I am writing to request your support in obtaining an exception from the management. I believe that, given my dedication and enthusiasm for the subject matter, I can successfully navigate the material without the prerequisite course.
Your support in this matter would be invaluable to me, and I am confident that with your backing, I can make the most of this learning opportunity and contribute positively to the course.
I appreciate your time and consideration and look forward to a swift response. Thank you for your ongoing support.
Sincerely,
Sam
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, regarding, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33043478261 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17123174414 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9053567152 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189161685259 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670992553915 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068652653724 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081863845051 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663839049959 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, regarding, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33043478261 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17123174414 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9053567152 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189161685259 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670992553915 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068652653724 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081863845051 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663839049959 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.