Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
Explain why you are writing
Describe your circumstances
Ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to the latest newspaper advertisement that you published about the new computer course offered at your university. I have never received any formal training in technology and I understand that this course requires some prerequisite knowledge. However, the digital arts have always intrigued me and I would like to enroll in this course.
Computers have always been my passion and I subscribe to a multitude of computer magazines. I have taught myself most of the popular computer languages and am familiar with software designing and websites creation. Learning online tutorials and videos have further developed my interest in computers and I would really appreciate it if I could enroll for the course to solidify my skills and learning.
I would be thankful if you could make an exception and allow me to be part of the course. Furthermore, I am available for an interview, as well as a test to demonstrate my technical knowledge and skills.
Hoping to receive a favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Praneet K Nadar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17045454545 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96536480551 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9647691172 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329600831017 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103016241043 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648818558688 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149177320235 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102610739946 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.