Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Principal,
I am writing a letter regarding enrollment into the computer course. Firstly, the introductory session to do Cloud Computing course was so impactful that I am sure that all students in the room were keen to learn more. Similarly, I wish to join the classes for Cloud subject.
I am a commerce graduate student from your college with good academic score with an average of 9.0 pointers last year. Although, being a non-IT student I wish to pursue the cloud computing course. The reason for not enrolling in the graduate IT program was the course fee was too costly. But, I always am curious to learn the working in Information Technology world.
Last week, I got to know about the above-mentioned course and I think if I get a chance to study this subject I can grow my skills and also can be of great help to working on some freelancing projects. Even though, I am aware of the criteria only students with a computer background can enroll this course. I think that students who are interested to learn should be given a chance too. Additionally, Certification of computer basics is already done by me. I would request you to kindly consider my request and to give an exception to grab this opportunity.
I assure you that If I get a chance I would complete the course with flying colors.
Yours faithfully,
Xyx
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-12-15 | Amna Zeeshan | 78 | view |
| 2023-12-15 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
| 2023-11-23 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-30 | nijam | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-30 | nijam | 73 | view |
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service Say when and how you ordered the cheque book Ask how mu 73
- Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 11
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one The new fashion will be to have 61
- The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities Derby and Nottingham Between 2000 and 2009 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 78
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h an average of 9.0 pointers last year. Although, being a non-IT student I wish to pursu...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'programs'?
Suggestion: programs
...on for not enrolling in the graduate IT program was the course fee was too costly. But,...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'am'.
Suggestion: am always
...s the course fee was too costly. But, I always am curious to learn the working in Informa...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, similarly, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68936170213 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78506005845 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587234042553 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9051291629 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7142857143 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194606911939 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632586319758 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403419863592 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124945197016 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293905937382 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h an average of 9.0 pointers last year. Although, being a non-IT student I wish to pursu...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'programs'?
Suggestion: programs
...on for not enrolling in the graduate IT program was the course fee was too costly. But,...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'am'.
Suggestion: am always
...s the course fee was too costly. But, I always am curious to learn the working in Informa...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, similarly, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68936170213 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78506005845 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587234042553 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9051291629 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7142857143 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194606911939 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632586319758 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403419863592 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124945197016 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293905937382 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.