The chart below gives information about the prices of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the two charts depicting the airfare of an undetermined Australian air carrier from Sydney to Melbourne and vice versa, during a period of two weeks in 2013.
It is conspicuous that there was a drastic escalation in the expenditure paid for the shuttle between Sydney and Melbourne on three consecutive end-days of two weeks. Furthermore, the highest price in both routes was documented in the first week.
Regarding week one, 80 dollars was the highest amount of money that passengers spent on Monday and Friday’s flights from Sydney to Melbourne and backward, respectively. The flattest cost to pay for any flights on Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday between Sydney and Melbourne was all under 40 dollars. However, the airfare for trips surged to 70 dollars and over on Friday prior to witnessing the constant diminution to Sunday at the cost of roughly 50 dollars, this was true in both ways.
When it comes to the second week, the price fluctuated from Tuesdays to Weekends was comparable in two lines; however, on Monday, the price diminished substantially to approximately under 50 dollars from over 60 dollars when compared with the first week. Moreover, the airfare from Melbourne to Sydney was more stable than the opposite way from Tuesday to Thursday with 35 percent maintenance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two charts depicting the airfare of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13551401869 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.790126616 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565420560748 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0104709081 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.375 76.5299724578 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172994932584 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844531057693 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474188705209 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122183312914 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407409071169 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 8.37731958763 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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