A close friend is coming to visit you he/she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area.
- Write a letter to your friend . In your letter ask more details about your friend's plans.
- Suggest some places to visit and things to do in your hometown.
- Tell your friend about food or drink he/she should try during his/her stay.
Dear Emily,
How have you been? It's been too long since the last time we met. Great to hear that you're coming to town! I'm looking forward to showing you around.
How long will you stay? Also, do you have any particular plan you want to do while staying here? Have you booked a hotel yet? If not, you are welcome to stay in my apartment.
You should definitely spend time to explore the centre of city. Of course you can visit some main sights like Duc Ba church, City post Office and so on, but it's also fun to wander around the street or some alleys to feel new experience. You can find a lot of hawkers, street food or café around the street.
Have you tried Vietnamese food before? If not, you should give it a shot. I promise you'll love it. Pho is amazing, but it's worth to try our other traditional food like "banh xeo". It's like pancake but more special, it has shrimp, meat, beef and so on,... You can try our traditional beer here with affordable price.
Let me know your plan and I'll see you soon!
Hailey
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...he last time we met. Great to hear that youre coming to town! Im looking forward to s...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...reat to hear that youre coming to town! Im looking forward to showing you around. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...t, you should give it a shot. I promise youll love it. Pho is amazing, but its worth ...
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Line 11, column 233, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'shrimped'.
Suggestion: shrimped
...s like pancake but more special, it has shrimp, meat, beef and so on,... You can try o...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ial, it has shrimp, meat, beef and so on,... You can try our traditional beer here...
^^
Line 14, column 27, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...e price. Let me know your plan and Ill see you soon! Hailey
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44329896907 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08963248638 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685567010309 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6120366287 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.7058823529 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4117647059 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166359414551 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573435856919 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433887267789 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10528466232 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340460891467 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.