The illustration demonstrates the process involved in the producing of frozen fish pies right from raw potatoes and fish to processed packaged pie to dispatch.
On the whole, it is evident that there are two independent process involved in manufacturing process of frozen fish pies.
To embark on, potatoes not more than one month old are sent for cleaning under water through the conveyer belt. Followed by peeling of skin and slicing into fine slices. Next the slices are sent for boiling under hot water and the to chilling unit later the chilled potatoes are moved to the fish pie mixture unit.
On the other hand, fish which was taken less than 12 hours is used in this process. Firstly, a mixture of lemon juice and salt is applied to fish and sent through steam oven through the conveyer belt. In the following unit, a team removes the bones and fish undergoes quality check, prepared peas and sauce is added to the fish. Finally, the pies and fish are sent for packing process, dispatched to store.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33870151866 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9627414488 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119217326316 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537028093597 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424177759936 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874911147741 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372270165993 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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