The diagram below shows the stages and equiment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes
The diagrams depict the ways in which cement and concrete are manufactured with specific tools. It also illustrates the role of cement in the process of making concrete for building purposes
Overall, while the first picture indicates 5 stages of cement production, beginning with crushing limestone and clay, and culminating in the packed cement; there are only 2 main stages related to the procedure of making concrete, which are adding the ingredients and mixing them in a specific machine
To begin with the manufacturing of cement, limestone and clay are together crushed by 2 rollers to turn into powder. Following this, the powder is mixed via a mixer before undergoing a heating process by going through a rotating heater with an addition of heat from the outside. This mixture is then ground by a grinder to become cement which is then packaged in bags and ready to use
Looking at the second illustration, it is apparent that cement is one of the main ingredients used to produce concrete. The first step is to add 15% of cement and 10% of water, with 25% of sand and 50% of small stones which are also referred as gravel into a concrete mixer. Then, this machine just need to spin around to create concrete
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- Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life Is it a positive or negative development 78
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- Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79620853081 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59846198201 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 16.3608247423 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.858993682 44.8134815571 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.666666667 76.5299724578 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.1666666667 16.8248392259 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 4.34317383033 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322042304384 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132886988936 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924215506995 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206005123583 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985186394891 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 8.37731958763 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 8.54432989691 187% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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