Dear Mr.Jones,
I am writing in regard to our talk on plane to Paris last month. If I want to remind you of that day, I should say that you were very surprised about the meaning of my name. At the start of journey we had a nice discussion about our names and the origins. I hope you remember me. I am Pooneh.
I hope you are well, and the problems related to your business, that you mentioned, have been solved till now. Actually I want to say that I am pleased to accept your suggestion for working in your business. Do you remember that you suggested me to work as a manager of the central restaurant? If I may, I want to be an accountant in one of your branches that you think I am suitable.
Since I have been an accountant for nearly fifteen years, it is more convenient for me to start working in this position. Besides, I am very enthusiastic about this job, and I think being a good manager needs some qualifications that I do not really have. I hope there would be a vacancy for me.
Thank you very much for your suggestion and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Pooneh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jones
Dear Mr.Jones, I am writing in regard to our talk ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I hope you remember me. I am Pooneh. I hope you are well, and the problems rel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, look, may, really, so, thus, well, i think, mind you, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30805687204 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54088554816 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549763033175 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0259148077 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9285714286 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239336976654 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881794237566 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654923536893 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156985122029 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672294920954 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.