Dear Mr. Jones,
I hope this letter of mine find you and your family in ravishing health. The purpose of my writing is to remind you about our recent interesting plane journey and your offer for a possible job in your restaurant's chain.
We met on "Vistara Airbus" on 21st of March while traveling from Bangalore to Delhi on the auspicious occasion of Holi, to meet and greet our kith and kin. As we discussed, you have about ten restaurants in Bangalore only and want to expand it in the Northen region of India. I could assist you to understand the Northen Market, as the taste and likes of people there are bit different from the South. I am from Delhi, I know the possible market areas with a reasonable cost for the restaurant business. I could be a Regional Advisor for you because of my awareness about surrounding and likes and dislikes of locals, also I have a Master's in Restaurants and Catering Management.
I will wait for your prompt response, I am attaching my resume and PAN number.
Please let me know about the idea and if any further documentation is required.
Your Sincerely,
ABC
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 383, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...the taste and likes of people there are bit different from the South. I am from Del...
^^^
Line 6, column 515, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nable cost for the restaurant business. I could be a Regional Advisor for you bec...
^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Restaurants and Catering Management. I will wait for your prompt response, I a...
^
Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... any further documentation is required. Your Sincerely, ABC
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72081218274 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76389296672 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0214720335 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1948287153 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759266652074 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742850267689 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111595914594 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119208501828 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.