During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter:
- remind him when and where you met
- tell him what kind of job you are interested in
- say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Stark,
I am writing in respect to the conservation dated on 1st November 2019 in a plane from Shanghai to Hong Kong. We had a discussion on the journey, and I learned that you are the owner of a chain of restaurants. I am delighted that you offered me an opportunity to join your company.
I am currently working as a manager in a local restaurant with multiple locations all around Hong Kong. My duty is to supervise all the restaurants in Hong Kong Island. Since I have heard that your restaurant is pioneering in Hong Kong, I am interested in applying for the position of regional manager at this district.
Based on my past working experience, I think I will be capable of the job. I have been working in the catering industry for more than ten years, and working in a managerial role for five years. I have confidence in rooting a brandy restaurant of Shanghai into Hong Kong market.
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Harry Potter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72777777778 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85057932167 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0632904637 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9166666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113249961451 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521740791105 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662287857848 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825478219805 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698088319979 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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