Dear sir
I am John studying in the English department of your institute. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am selected by the electronic company as the maintenance engineer, so I am unable to attend the classes.
As you know yesterday I appeared for the interview and I am selected. So from tomorrow onwards after completing the joining formalities I have to join the comapny which is located outside the city.the timing of company is from 9:00 am to 5:pm. so, it is difficult for me attend the classes even in the early morning or in evening .
I hope you will cooperate with me and allow me to do the job. After one month I will try my best to join the classes by managing the time with the comapny director. I am looking forward response from your side.
Yours faithfully
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nance engineer, so I am unable to attend the classes. As you know yesterday I ap...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ing of company is from 9:00 am to 5:pm. so, it is difficult for me attend the clas...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... even in the early morning or in evening . I hope you will cooperate with me and...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ate with me and allow me to do the job. After one month I will try my best to join th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 652.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 146.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46575342466 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60580626575 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8281815286 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4444444444 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136942188959 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060295970692 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035966595402 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878379186856 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455268201094 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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