You borrow some books from your school or college library.unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative Nd cannot returns the books in time.wrute a letter to library what has happened and tell what you want to do about it
Respected Sir
I am xyz student of commerce department of you college.i am writing this letter to feel apology for the book I have taken from department library.
Last week,a book on basis of commerce I borrowed from library .as per the rules of library, book has to be returned or renew within 5days.but due to my relative illness I have to go home urgently as there is need of two persons .and she is also one of my close friend.unfortunately I forgot to told roommate to return the book.
So,on the behalf of this. I request you to please extend the date of return by two weeks because I have to make some notes from the book. As soon as i returned from there and after completing the notes I return it to library. I am willing to pay the fine as involved.
I am looking forward response from your side. Yours faithfully
XyZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: I
...t of commerce department of you college.i am writing this letter to feel apology ...
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...en from department library. Last week,a book on basis of commerce I borrowed fr...
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...asis of commerce I borrowed from library .as per the rules of library, book has to...
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...urgently as there is need of two persons .and she is also one of my close friend.u...
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... told roommate to return the book. So,on the behalf of this. I request you to pl...
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...ke some notes from the book. As soon as i returned from there and after completin...
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...esponse from your side. Yours faithfully XyZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 683.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4064516129 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66338334118 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.0650821058 44.8134815571 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 85.375 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298541527342 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102615742187 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823102444322 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162502402882 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493357336875 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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